changelog editing pass

Author: myk002

changelog.txt

@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ Template for new versions:
 
 ## New Tools
 - `fix/stuck-squad`: allow squads and messengers returning from missions to rescue squads that have gotten stuck on the world map
-- `gui/rename`: (reinstated) give new in-game language-based names to anything that can be named (e.g. units, governments, fortresses, or the world)
+- `gui/rename`: (reinstated) give new in-game language-based names to anything that can be named (units, governments, fortresses, the world, etc.)
 
 ## New Features
 - `gui/settings-manager`: new overlay on the Labor -> Standing Orders tab for configuring the number of barrels to reserve for job use (so you can brew alcohol and not have all your barrels claimed by stockpiles for container storage)