Powerpoint presentation proofreading #18
Description
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"40 years old game" <-- "40-year-old game"
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"First computer was" <-- "My first computer was"
"and finally switch" <-- "and I eventually switched"
"known as Dbug first" <-- "known as Dbug. First"
"Has been working " <-- "Have been working"
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"you’d" <-- "you'd" (single quote instead of accent)
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"most of the games were in French" <-- "most games were in French"
"spent the time in my dictionary to understand what a “Thug”" <-- "spent a lot of time with my dictionary to understand what a “thug”"
"At that point I realize" <-- "At that point I realized"
"Got stuck in this indecision valley of hell for one year and moved to some other projects." <-- "Got stuck in the Indecision Valley of Hell for a year and moved on to other projects."
"I restarted from scratch in April 2023, reusing the images I had already made, and I've worked on it continuously since then." <-- "I started from scratch in April 2023, only reusing the images I had already made and worked on it continuously since then."
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"your Mc Giver skills" <-- "your MacGyver skills"
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"manage the content" <-- "manage the contents"
"add, modify, renamed and delete" <-- "add, modify, rename and delete"
"never get changed" <-- "never changes"
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"display list, and does not" <-- "display list, and it does not"
"compositing need to" <-- "compositing needs to"
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"Had to do some tweaks" <-- "I had to do tweak the player"
"the Typewriter intro sequence" <-- "the typewriter intro sequence"
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"for that one I’m going" <-- "for this one I’m going"
"Will be interesting to see if PC gamers can actually find an emulated 8bit game to be interesting to play!" <-- "It will be interesting to see if modern PC gamers can actually find an emulated 8-bit game interesting to play!""
"If not, well I guess I’ll have an interesting comment section to read!" <-- "If not... well, I guess I’ll have some interesting comment sections to read!"