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@@ -2,8 +2,11 @@ Mr Ong has a way of teaching;
 it's fun and full of life. 
 He talks about atoms and molecules; 
 although we sometimes sigh.
+i do think this line above can be added with something more than atoms and molecules?
 I think the effort he puts in is tremendous;
 there are no doubts asking why.
+add stuff here about what he does to show his efforts
+this kinda sound weird
 I think we all like him, 
 his way of engaging us is funny; 
 and we wouldn't forget why.