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 Mr Ong has a way of teaching; 
 it's fun and full of life. 
 He often talks about atoms and molecules; 
-although we sometimes sigh.
+although sometimes we sigh.
 Not to mention kahoot;
 Where he bobs to the beat of the boot;
 I think the effort he puts in is tremendous;
-there are no doubts asking why.
-I think he is the best, 
-his way of engaging us saturates our brains; 
-and we wouldn't forget why.😎
+everyone should know why.
+I think he that he is the best, 
+his special ways of engaging us saturates our brains; 
+allowing us to never forget why.😎
 (Idea used by Ng Ying Xuan, 1H)