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@@ -2,13 +2,13 @@ The Stickman
 
 July 6 1969, 10 years ago
 
-"Julie stop, what are you doing get down from there!"
+"Julie stop, what are you doing, get down from there now!"
 
 "ARHHHHH!!! ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!"
 
 "Are you insane get down from there, JULIE!!!"
 
-A fight broke out in the other room, I heard books falling to the ground. I squeezed my 6 year old body into a tiny ball, leaning against the bedroom wall, I wondered what was going on. Ever since the start of the year, my elder sister had gone insane and always screamed and yelled before going to bed.
+A fight broke out in the other room, as I heard the books tumble to the ground. I squeezed my 6 year old body into a tiny ball, leaning against the bedroom wall, left to wonder what was going on. Ever since the start of the year, my elder sister gone insane, always screaming and yelling before going to bed.
 
 _"The stickman comes to those who sleep,
 _when nightfall comes their souls he reaps.