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README.md

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 * [Join the WebVR Slack](https://webvr.rocks/slack) (join the [#unity channel](https://webvr.slack.com/messages/unity))
 
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 ## Developer Privacy Notice for Data Collection
 
-To help improve the WebVR API and the [Unity WebVR assets](https://assetstore.unity.com/packages/templates/systems/webvr-assets-109152), Mozilla automatically receives [general-usage statistics](./TELEMETRY.md#list-of-collected-data) and error exceptions of end users, using [Sentry](https://sentry.io) and [Google Analytics](https://analytics.google.com/analytics/web/).
+_Last updated: March 2018_
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+To help improve the [WebVR API](https://immersive-web.github.io/webvr/spec/1.1/) and the [Unity WebVR Assets](https://assetstore.unity.com/packages/templates/systems/webvr-assets-109152) package, each time a web page built using the [WebVR Assets](https://assetstore.unity.com/packages/templates/systems/webvr-assets-109152) is loaded, Mozilla automatically receives general-usage statistics and uncaught JavaScript errors encountered by end-users, using [Google Analytics](https://analytics.google.com/analytics/web/) and [Sentry](https://sentry.io), respectively. [The *complete list of collected data*](./TELEMETRY.MD#list-of-collected-data) includes metrics for counting the number of unique web-page sessions; time for web pages to load and time open; JavaScript error exceptions occurred on the page; the number of times a VR device is mounted and worn; number of times VR mode is enabled and time spent; and a random identifier.
 
-Developers can turn off this data collection by [modifying the configuration snippet that comes with the VR template](./docs/customization/disabling-telemetry.md).
+You as a developer can turn off this data collection by [modifying the configuration snippet that comes with the VR template](https://github.com/mozilla/unity-webvr-export/blob/master/docs/customization/disabling-telemetry.md). It is your obligation to inform your end-users of this data collection and to inform them that it can be turned off by [enabling “Do-Not-Track”](https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Web/HTTP/Headers/DNT) in their browsers.
 
-End users can turn off this data collection by enabling [`Do-Not-Track`](https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Web/HTTP/Headers/DNT) in their browsers.
 
 ## Credits
 

TELEMETRY.md

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 # Developer Privacy Notice for Data Collection
 
-To help improve the WebVR API and the [Unity WebVR assets](https://assetstore.unity.com/packages/templates/systems/webvr-assets-109152), Mozilla automatically receives general-usage statistics and error exceptions of end users, using [Sentry](https://sentry.io) and [Google Analytics](https://analytics.google.com/analytics/web/).
+_Last updated: March 2018_
 
-Developers can turn off this data collection by [modifying the configuration snippet that comes with the VR template](./docs/customization/disabling-telemetry.md).
+To help improve the [WebVR API](https://immersive-web.github.io/webvr/spec/1.1/) and the [Unity WebVR Assets](https://assetstore.unity.com/packages/templates/systems/webvr-assets-109152) package, each time a web page built using the [WebVR Assets](https://assetstore.unity.com/packages/templates/systems/webvr-assets-109152) is loaded, Mozilla automatically receives general-usage statistics and uncaught JavaScript errors encountered by end-users, using [Google Analytics](https://analytics.google.com/analytics/web/) and [Sentry](https://sentry.io), respectively. [The *complete list of collected data*](./TELEMETRY.MD#list-of-collected-data) includes metrics for counting the number of unique web-page sessions; time for web pages to load and time open; JavaScript error exceptions occurred on the page; the number of times a VR device is mounted and worn; number of times VR mode is enabled and time spent; and a random identifier.
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+You as a developer can turn off this data collection by [modifying the configuration snippet that comes with the VR template](https://github.com/mozilla/unity-webvr-export/blob/master/docs/customization/disabling-telemetry.md). It is your obligation to inform your end-users of this data collection and to inform them that it can be turned off by [enabling “Do-Not-Track”](https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Web/HTTP/Headers/DNT) in their browsers.
 
-End users can turn off this data collection by enabling [`Do-Not-Track`](https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Web/HTTP/Headers/DNT) in their browsers.
 
 ## List of Collected Data
 
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 - [WebAssembly (WASM) API](http://webassembly.org) support (i.e., `WebAssembly`)
 - [Web Worker](https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Web/API/Web_Workers_API) support (i.e., `Worker`)
 - [Service Worker API](https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Web/API/Service_Worker_API) (i.e., `navigator.serviceWorker`)
-- [`requestIdleCallback` API](https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Web/API/Window/requestIdleCallback) (i.e., `window.requestIdleCallback`)
+- [`requestIdleCallback` API](https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Web/API/Window/requestIdleCallback) (i.e., `window.requestIdleCallback`)