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From: CmptAdam <37913687+CmptAdam@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Mon, 2 Apr 2018 17:36:18 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Update README.md

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@@ -7,17 +7,16 @@ Website: [phpixie.com](https://phpixie.com/)
 
 PHPixie started as a micro framework and has gradually grown to be one of the 
 most popular fullstack PHP frameworks while retaining its high performance. 
-This is in part because of the strict architecture that avoids common pitfalls 
-such as reliance on static methods, global scope, singletons and other antipatterns, 
-thus also ensuring that the code is easy to read, debug, extend and test. 
-In fact, all PHPixie components boast full unit test coverage. This PHP framework
-never stands in your way and provides you with full control over execution 
-flow. It's easy to learn and straightforward to master.
-
-But it's not all just about the code. The PHPixie community is very friendly and 
-helpful—you can expect an answer to your question within minutes of asking 
-it in the chat. The framework documentation is full of examples and is regularly 
-updated with tutorial videos.
+The reason why that PHPixie will be one of the most popular full stack PHP frameworks
+is that the strict architecture that avoids common pitfalls such as reliance on static
+methods, global scope, singletons and other antipatterns, and ensures that the code is 
+easy to read, debug, extend and test. In fact, all PHPixie components boast full unit 
+test coverage. The PHPixie never stands in your way and provides you with full control 
+over execution flow, therefore; the PHPixie is easy to learn and straightforward to master.
+
+But, the PHPixie is not all just about the code. It has a friendly and helpful community 
+so that you can expect an answer to your question within minutes of asking it in the chat.
+The framework documentation is full of examples and is regularly updated with tutorial videos.
 
 ## Demo
 Want to see an example? Check out a simple base project implementing user and administrator authorization: https://github.com/phpixie/project-auth