Video Script SCDL1991 S2 2021

[KevinS9714]

Hi @kym834 and @yaelago,

I've attached below a link to the Google doc containing a draft for our script. Unfortunately we have written a fair bit more than we can cover in 5 minutes, and so would love to know what you think we should edit/remove.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/17GgnjvDdqxlp4O8gTZcy5q4URToyrc9SjgRmeM-rp64/edit?usp=sharing

Thanks!

[kym834]

Hi all (@KevinS9714 @ddsi7192 @dzheng918 @olwu3220 @carolineson @ArchDavies)

We provided some feedback on the script doc. It's a good draft, though there is a lot there. We've both suggested cutting the conclusion down to a few short sentences. Keep it short and punchy, hitting the big notes. No need to get bogged down in too many of the minor detail here.

While what you've got will work, I strongly recommend you consider how you can tell a story such that it flows and you don't have to say "and then we did this" all the time. It will save you sooo much time which you can then use to share what your contributions were and it will be engaging!

Please let us know if you want to discuss anything or have any questions. We are happy to help :)