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From: Takeshi Shimada <expensivegasprices@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 27 Oct 2025 02:11:03 +0900
Subject: [PATCH] docs: Reduce redundant expressions in English documentation
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- Update version from 0.1.6 to 1.0.0 in GettingStarted.md
- Simplify opening description for better readability
- Change "Reduced code" to "Less boilerplate code" for clarity
- Remove duplicate "Caught at compile time" bullet point
- Consolidate middleware description into single sentence
- Simplify "Use for" to more direct phrasing

These changes improve documentation clarity without changing
technical accuracy or meaning.

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Co-Authored-By: Claude <noreply@anthropic.com>
---
 README.md                                | 9 ++++-----
 Sources/Flow/Flow.docc/GettingStarted.md | 4 ++--
 2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index 5c5d147..82d9e76 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 [![Platforms](https://img.shields.io/badge/Platforms-iOS%20|%20macOS%20|%20watchOS%20|%20tvOS-blue.svg)](https://github.com/ViewFeature/Flow)
 [![License](https://img.shields.io/badge/License-MIT-blue.svg)](LICENSE)
 
-A library for managing state in SwiftUI applications in a type-safe way. Flow provides a unidirectional data flow architecture with full support for Swift 6 Approachable Concurrency.
+A type-safe state management library for SwiftUI applications. Flow provides a unidirectional data flow architecture with full support for Swift 6 Approachable Concurrency.
 
 <p align="center">
     <img src="flow-diagram.svg" alt="Flow Architecture Diagram" />
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ final class State {
 ```
 
 - No Combine dependency
-- Reduced code
+- Less boilerplate code
 - Integrates with SwiftUI's standard APIs
 
 ### Approachable Concurrency
@@ -205,11 +205,10 @@ func handle() -> ActionHandler<Action, State, Void> {
 - Thread-safety guaranteed
 - Native `async/await` support
 - Direct state mutations in `.run` blocks
-- Caught at compile time, not runtime
 
 ### Observable Actions
 
-Flow uses **middleware** to observe actions. This enables implementing cross-cutting concerns like logging, analytics, and debugging.
+Flow uses **middleware** to observe actions, enabling cross-cutting concerns like logging, analytics, and debugging.
 
 ```swift
 struct AnalyticsMiddleware: BeforeActionMiddleware {
@@ -231,7 +230,7 @@ func handle() -> ActionHandler<Action, State, Void> {
 ```
 
 - Observe all actions in one place
-- Use for logging, analytics, and debugging
+- Logging, analytics, and debugging support
 
 ## Documentation
 
diff --git a/Sources/Flow/Flow.docc/GettingStarted.md b/Sources/Flow/Flow.docc/GettingStarted.md
index 7c5f99f..e2d0384 100644
--- a/Sources/Flow/Flow.docc/GettingStarted.md
+++ b/Sources/Flow/Flow.docc/GettingStarted.md
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ Add Flow to your `Package.swift`:
 
 ```swift
 dependencies: [
-    .package(url: "https://github.com/ViewFeature/Flow.git", from: "0.1.6")
+    .package(url: "https://github.com/ViewFeature/Flow.git", from: "1.0.0")
 ]
 ```
 
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ dependencies: [
 
 1. Select **File → Add Package Dependencies**
 2. Enter the URL: `https://github.com/ViewFeature/Flow.git`
-3. Select version: `0.1.6` or later
+3. Select version: `1.0.0` or later
 4. Add to your target's **Build Settings → Other Swift Flags**: `-default-isolation MainActor`
 
 ## Build a Counter App