Install: Implement suggestions by CodeRabbit

Author: amotl

docs/install/cloud/aws/s3-setup.md

@@ -27,8 +27,8 @@ instances.
 
 It is recommended to restrict the permissions of CrateDB on S3 to only the
 required extent. First, an IAM role is required. This [AWS guide] gives a
-short description of how to create a policy offer using the CLI or the AWS
-management console. Further, access of the snapshot to the S3 bucket needs to
+short description of how to create a policy either using the CLI or the AWS
+Management Console. Further, access of the snapshot to the S3 bucket needs to
 be restricted. An example policy file granting anybody access to a bucket
 called `snaps.example.com` is attached below:
 

docs/install/container/docker.md

@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ Breaking the command down:
 - Defines the environment variable {ref}`CRATE_HEAP_SIZE <crate-reference:conf-env-heap-size>`,
   which is used by CrateDB to allocate 1 GB for its heap memory.
 - Runs the command `crate` inside the container with parameters:
-  : - `network.host`: The `_site_` value results in the binding of the
+    - `network.host`: The `_site_` value results in the binding of the
       CrateDB process to a site-local IP address.
     - `node.name`: Defines the node's name as `crate01` (used by
       master election).

docs/install/container/kubernetes/kubernetes.md

@@ -234,9 +234,9 @@ spec:
           - -Cgateway.expected_data_nodes=${EXPECTED_NODES}
           - -Cpath.data=/data
         volumeMounts:
-            # Mount the `/data` directory as a volume named `data`.
+            # Mount the volume named `cratedb-data` to the `/data` directory.
             - mountPath: /data
-              name: data
+              name: cratedb-data
         resources:
           limits:
             # How much memory each pod gets.

docs/install/redhat.md

@@ -54,11 +54,16 @@ can read more about the [release workflow].
 
 If `sudo` is missing, run this as root:
 ```shell
-# Red Hat-compatible systems
+# Red Hat-compatible systems (RHEL/CentOS 8+)
 dnf install sudo
 ```
 or:
 ```shell
+# Red Hat-compatible systems (RHEL/CentOS 7)
+yum install sudo
+```
+or:
+```shell
 # SUSE-based systems
 zypper install sudo
 ```
@@ -68,8 +73,14 @@ zypper install sudo
 With everything set up, you can install CrateDB:
 
 ```shell
+# Red Hat-compatible systems
 sudo dnf install --enablerepo=cratedb-ce-stable crate
 ```
+or:
+```shell
+# SUSE-based systems
+sudo zypper install --repo=cratedb-ce-stable crate
+```
 
 :::{TIP}
 On older Red Hat and CentOS installations, please use the `yum` command