From 08f249621655ff039c7774375d9091fe2bde9072 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Andre Pramaditya <caxvis@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 28 May 2019 08:49:30 +0700
Subject: [PATCH] Fix the grammar

---
 src/components/Footer.vue |  2 +-
 src/pages/Blog.vue        |  2 +-
 src/pages/Contact.vue     |  2 +-
 src/pages/Index.vue       | 11 ++++++-----
 src/pages/Join.vue        |  8 ++++----
 src/pages/Thanks.vue      |  4 ++--
 6 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/components/Footer.vue b/src/components/Footer.vue
index 0969cfa..df14b9b 100644
--- a/src/components/Footer.vue
+++ b/src/components/Footer.vue
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <template>
   <footer class="c-footer cf white f6 mt5">
     <div class="fl w-30-l w-50-m w-100 tl-ns tc">
-      <p>&copy; {{ new Date().getFullYear() }} • evilfactory</p>
+      <p>&copy; 2018-{{ new Date().getFullYear() }} • evilfactory</p>
     </div>
     <div class="fl w-70-l w-50-m w-100 tr-ns tc">
       <p>hello@evilfactory.id</p>
diff --git a/src/pages/Blog.vue b/src/pages/Blog.vue
index 699fc5e..9ee664a 100644
--- a/src/pages/Blog.vue
+++ b/src/pages/Blog.vue
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ export default {
       title: 'Blog by evilfactory',
       meta: metaTagGenerator({
         title: 'Blog by evilfactory',
-        description: 'Read what our thoughts, tinkering, the proccess, and the output. Enjoy.',
+        description: 'Read our thoughts, experiments, the proccess, and the outcome of it. Enjoy.',
         url: 'https://evilfactory.id/blog/'
       })
     }
diff --git a/src/pages/Contact.vue b/src/pages/Contact.vue
index 22e8fdb..561b384 100644
--- a/src/pages/Contact.vue
+++ b/src/pages/Contact.vue
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
       @submit.prevent="handleSubmit"
     >
       <p class="dn">
-        <label>Don’t fill this out if you're human: <input name="bot-field" /></label>
+        <label>Don’t fill this out if you're an actual human being: <input name="bot-field" /></label>
       </p>
       <div class="mt3">
         <label
diff --git a/src/pages/Index.vue b/src/pages/Index.vue
index 7906658..7b7eab7 100644
--- a/src/pages/Index.vue
+++ b/src/pages/Index.vue
@@ -12,15 +12,15 @@
       </h2>
       <p class="lh-copy mt4">
         evilfactory is a small team specializing in Modern Web Technologies.
-        We are tinkering with existing web technologies, JavaScript, Web Assembly
-        and Developer Experience.
+        We are experimenting with existing web technologies, mostly JavaScript, Web Assembly
+        and the Developer Experience behind it.
       </p>
       <p class="lh-copy mt4">
         Also, the Platform itself.
       </p>
       <p class="lh-copy mt4">
-        Our work (and posts) cover numerous topics, mostly about Web Platform; Its ecosystem,
-        JavaScript and so on like exploring new technologies.
+        Our work (and posts) cover numerous topics, mostly about the Web Platform: it's ecosystem,
+        JavaScript and the new technologies around it.
       </p>
       <p class="lh-copy mt4">
         Launching a new web application? Need help with an existing project?
@@ -46,7 +46,8 @@ export default {
       title: 'evilfactory: The Web Technologies tinkerer team',
       meta: metaTagGenerator({
         title: 'evilfactory: The Web Technologies tinkerer team',
-        description: 'We are tinkering with modern web technologies. Believe in OSS and speak JavaScript both on frontend and backend',
+        description: 'We are experimenting with existing web technologies, mostly JavaScript, Web Assembly
+        and the Developer Experience behind it.',
         url: 'https://evilfactory.id'
       })
     }
diff --git a/src/pages/Join.vue b/src/pages/Join.vue
index dd217c4..459059e 100644
--- a/src/pages/Join.vue
+++ b/src/pages/Join.vue
@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
   <Layout>
     <h1>Join</h1>
     <p>
-      Wanna having fun and learning together? We don't have enough time to create this UI,
+      Want to have fun and learn together? We don't have enough time to create the UI for this,
       but you can apply by sending a POST request to <code>https://join.evilfactory.now.sh</code>
-      with parameters:
+      with the following parameters:
     </p>
     <ul>
       <li><code>name</code> string of your name</li>
@@ -28,10 +28,10 @@
     }' \
     -H "Content-Type: application/json"</pre>
     <p>
-      Once the request was succesfully sent, we'll getting in touch with you via email.
+      Once the request has been succesfully sent, we will be getting in touch with you via email.
     </p>
     <p>
-      Currently we are only accepting for intern position.
+      Currently we are only accepting interns.
     </p>
   </Layout>
 </template>
diff --git a/src/pages/Thanks.vue b/src/pages/Thanks.vue
index 8088510..589aa85 100644
--- a/src/pages/Thanks.vue
+++ b/src/pages/Thanks.vue
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <template>
   <Layout>
     <h1>Thanks</h1>
-    <p>Your submission successfully submitted. We'll get in touch soon.</p>
+    <p>Your submission has been successfully submitted. We will get in touch with you soon.</p>
   </Layout>
 </template>
 
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ export default {
       title: 'Thanks',
       meta: metaTagGenerator({
         title: 'Thanks',
-        description: "Your submission successfully submitted. We'll get in touch soon.",
+        description: "Your submission has been successfully submitted. We will get in touch with you soon.",
         url: 'https://evilfactory.id/thanks/'
       })
     }