From 187dcb19ff57ff10f26e41fcb9764a3acd32016b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: iam-regina <69836954+iam-regina@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Tue, 1 Sep 2020 17:26:05 +0800 Subject: [PATCH 1/2] grammar,lyrics and tune edits i only saw the first part cos im not familiar with the rest. Hope it helps! --- file 1.md | 10 +++++++--- 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/file 1.md b/file 1.md index a312790..38f7a48 100644 --- a/file 1.md +++ b/file 1.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ Fireworks by Katy Perry (lyrics edit) Do you ever feel just like a piece of trash -Drifting trough your ife +Drifting trough your life Wanting to change it all @@ -12,13 +12,17 @@ Do you ever feel there's no point in life Like a house of sticks One blow from collapsing +(To me, this line doesnt match the tune if you were to hum it, so maybe...can say +Do you ever feel, feel that life's so bleak +everything is grey +not a single hue) Do you ever feel like no one understands All you say and do -Yet no one seems to get a thing +No one gets a thing Do you know that there's still a chance for you @@ -27,7 +31,7 @@ There's still hope in you You just have to find your hope -And bighten yourself +And brighten up Just find the one From dea411ac2f484f5a5a602b9115ff98b71ded17c2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: iam-regina <69836954+iam-regina@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Tue, 1 Sep 2020 17:27:32 +0800 Subject: [PATCH 2/2] Update README.md --- README.md | 1 + 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+) diff --git a/README.md b/README.md index 4eeaaf3..2f75cab 100644 --- a/README.md +++ b/README.md @@ -1 +1,2 @@ Hi YwY +can add more about yourself heheheheheh lol