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pages/web_cloud/email_and_collaborative_solutions/microsoft_exchange/exchange_manage_logs/guide.en-gb.md

@@ -29,15 +29,15 @@ Log files allow you to perform the following actions:
 - Resolve errors encountered on the computer system.
 - Optimise the operation and performance of the computer system.
 
-Your Private Exchange or Trusted Exchange offer therefore generates its own logs. You may need to consult or retrieve the logs to analyse access to your email boxes or to track email flows.
+Your Private Exchange or Trusted Exchange offer therefore generates its own logs. You may need to consult or retrieve the logs to analyse access to your email inboxes or to track email flows.
 
-**Discover how to view and manage logs on your Private Exchange or Trusted Exchange offer**
+**Discover how to view and manage logs on your Private Exchange or Trusted Exchange offer.**
 
 ## Requirements
 
 - You have subscribed to a [Private Exchange](/links/web/emails-hosted-exchange) or [Trusted Exchange](/links/web/emails-trusted-exchange) offer.
-- A Logs Data Platform (LDP) account. This guide will guide you through all the necessary steps: [Quick start for Logs Data Platform](/pages/manage_and_operate/observability/logs_data_platform/getting_started_quick_start).
-- Access to the [OVHcloud Control Panel](/links/manager).
+- You have a Logs Data Platform (LDP) account. This guide will guide you through all the necessary steps: [Quick start for Logs Data Platform](/pages/manage_and_operate/observability/logs_data_platform/getting_started_quick_start).
+- You have access to the [OVHcloud Control Panel](/links/manager).
 
 ## Instructions
 
@@ -61,9 +61,9 @@ Exchange services offer two types of logs:
 
 - **Access**: Allows you to view the activity of connections on your Exchange service.
 - **Messagetracking**: Allows you to view detailed logs of the email flows through your Exchange service. You will find the following information:
-    - the delivery status of emails on your Exchange accounts;
-    - the sending status of emails from your Exchange service;
-    - the size of transmitted emails;
+    - Delivery status of emails on your Exchange accounts
+    - Sending status of emails from your Exchange service
+    - Size of transmitted emails
     - etc.
 
 ### Integrate your Exchange solution logs on Logs Data Platform
@@ -72,16 +72,16 @@ The Logs Data Platform solution can be useful if you have a large infrastructure
 
 It works by retrieving logs generated by your infrastructure, websites or applications to, for example:
 
-- store them;
-- display them in real-time dashboards;
-- allow users to perform complex queries;
-- filter them by date, application, type or content.
+- Store them.
+- Display them in real-time dashboards.
+- Allow users to perform complex queries.
+- Filter them by date, application, type or content.
 
 > [!primary]
 >
-> For more details on Logs Data Platform, consult our introduction guide to [Logs Data Platform (EN)](/pages/manage_and_operate/observability/logs_data_platform/getting_started_introduction_to_LDP).
+> For more details on Logs Data Platform, consult our introduction guide to [Logs Data Platform](/pages/manage_and_operate/observability/logs_data_platform/getting_started_introduction_to_LDP).
 
-Exchange solutions are compatible with various services such as shared hosting, VPS and dedicated servers. They can also be complemented by data streams on Logs Data Platform, in addition to the real-time logs already available.
+Exchange solutions are compatible with various services such as web hosting, VPS and dedicated servers. They can also be complemented by data streams on Logs Data Platform, in addition to the real-time logs already available.
 
 To subscribe your Exchange solution logs to a data stream on Logs Data Platform, perform the following actions:
 
@@ -101,14 +101,14 @@ From the page that appears, select the desired Logs Data Platform account in the
 Two scenarios are then available to subscribe your Exchange solution:
 
 > [!tabs]
-> **Case n°1**
+> **Case 1**
 >> **Subscribing to an existing data stream on your Logs Data Platform solution**
 >>
 >> If the relevant stream already exists, it appears as a line in the table. In this specific case, to subscribe your Exchange solution to this existing stream, simply click on the `Subscribe`{.action} button located to the right of the line corresponding to the relevant stream.
 >>
->> After a few moments and if you remain on the same page, a message appears in your control panel to inform you that the subscription has been successfully created.
+>> After a few moments a message appears in your Control Panel on the same page to inform you that the subscription has been successfully created.
 >>
-> **Case n°2**
+> **Case 2**
 >> **Subscribing to a new data stream on your Logs Data Platform solution**
 >>
 >> If the relevant stream does not yet exist, click on the `Add a data stream`{.action} button. You will then be redirected to a new page in your OVHcloud Control Panel, where you can create a new data stream on your Logs Data Platform solution.
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ Two scenarios are then available to subscribe your Exchange solution:
 >>
 >> You will then be redirected to the `Data stream`{.action} tab of your Logs Data Platform solution.
 >>
->> You can now subscribe your Exchange solution to your new Logs Data Platform stream by following the instructions at the beginning of this chapter.
+>> You can now subscribe your Exchange solution to your new Logs Data Platform stream by following the instructions above.
 
 ## Go further <a name="go-further"></a>
 
@@ -133,6 +133,6 @@ For specialised services (SEO, development, etc.), contact [OVHcloud partners](/
 
 [Quick start for Logs Data Platform](/pages/manage_and_operate/observability/logs_data_platform/getting_started_quick_start)
 
-If you need assistance with the use and configuration of your OVHcloud solutions, we invite you to consult our various [support offers](/links/support).
+If you would like assistance using and configuring your OVHcloud solutions, please refer to our [support offers](/links/support).
 
-Join our [community of users](/links/community).
+Join our [community of users](/links/community).