diff --git a/Mom b/Mom new file mode 100644 index 0000000..c897e76 --- /dev/null +++ b/Mom @@ -0,0 +1,40 @@ +Page 1: The Descent +Panel 1 +(Location: A neon-drenched street at night. Rain is slick on the pavement. Ren stands before a grand, inconspicuous doorway with a golden crest.) +Ren: (Thinking) I’ve saved for months. Just one night to forget everything... to forget the face I shouldn't want. +Panel 2 +(Location: Inside the brothel lobby. It is opulent, draped in velvet. A Mama-san with a sharp smile approaches him.) +Mama-san: "Welcome, young master. You look like you have a heavy heart. Shall I bring you our finest? The one who heals all wounds?" +Ren: "Yes. Give me the best you have." +Page 2: The Unveiling +Panel 1 +(Location: A private, dimly lit suite. Hana (as "Mika") is sitting on the edge of a silk-covered bed, her back to the door. She is wearing an elaborate kimono, her hair pinned high.) +Hana: "Welcome... I've been waiting for you." +Panel 2 +(Close-up on Ren’s face. His eyes widen, his pupils shrinking in absolute shock as he recognizes the silhouette and the voice.) +Ren: "...Mom?" +Panel 3 +(Hana freezes. She turns slowly, her face pale beneath the heavy white makeup. Her fan drops to the floor.) +Hana: [Terrified, shaking] "Ren? No... you shouldn't be here. This... this is a mistake!" +Page 3: The Confrontation +Panel 1 +(Ren walks toward her, his expression shifting from shock to a dark, intense clarity. He grabs her wrist as she tries to hide her face.) +Ren: "So this is the 'late-night office job'? My saint of a mother... selling herself to strangers?" +Hana: [Crying] "I did it for you! For your school! Please, Ren, look away!" +Panel 2 +(Ren pulls her close, his voice dropping to a whisper. The power dynamic shifts instantly.) +Ren: "I've spent years suffocating because I wanted you. And here you are... available for a price." +Hana: [Stunned, gasping] "What are you saying...?" +Panel 3 +(Ren pushes her back onto the bed, hovering over her. His gaze is possessive.) +Ren: "If you’re going to be a whore, then you’re mine. No more strangers. From tonight, you belong only to your son." +Page 4: The New Contract +Panel 1 +(A silent, heavy moment. Hana looks up at him, the shame in her eyes being replaced by a twisted sense of relief. She reaches up to touch his face.) +Hana: "If that's what you want... if that's the only way you'll stay with me..." +Panel 2 +(Ren begins to undo the ties of her kimono. The "Mother" is gone; only the "Possession" remains.) +Ren: "Everything you are... it’s all mine now. I’ll be your only master." +Panel 3 +(The light in the room dims. They embrace, a silhouette of a bond that has broken all laws.) +Ren: "Welcome home, Mom."