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Page 1: The Descent
Panel 1
(Location: A neon-drenched street at night. Rain is slick on the pavement. Ren stands before a grand, inconspicuous doorway with a golden crest.)
Ren: (Thinking) I’ve saved for months. Just one night to forget everything... to forget the face I shouldn't want.
Panel 2
(Location: Inside the brothel lobby. It is opulent, draped in velvet. A Mama-san with a sharp smile approaches him.)
Mama-san: "Welcome, young master. You look like you have a heavy heart. Shall I bring you our finest? The one who heals all wounds?"
Ren: "Yes. Give me the best you have."
Page 2: The Unveiling
Panel 1
(Location: A private, dimly lit suite. Hana (as "Mika") is sitting on the edge of a silk-covered bed, her back to the door. She is wearing an elaborate kimono, her hair pinned high.)
Hana: "Welcome... I've been waiting for you."
Panel 2
(Close-up on Ren’s face. His eyes widen, his pupils shrinking in absolute shock as he recognizes the silhouette and the voice.)
Ren: "...Mom?"
Panel 3
(Hana freezes. She turns slowly, her face pale beneath the heavy white makeup. Her fan drops to the floor.)
Hana: [Terrified, shaking] "Ren? No... you shouldn't be here. This... this is a mistake!"
Page 3: The Confrontation
Panel 1
(Ren walks toward her, his expression shifting from shock to a dark, intense clarity. He grabs her wrist as she tries to hide her face.)
Ren: "So this is the 'late-night office job'? My saint of a mother... selling herself to strangers?"
Hana: [Crying] "I did it for you! For your school! Please, Ren, look away!"
Panel 2
(Ren pulls her close, his voice dropping to a whisper. The power dynamic shifts instantly.)
Ren: "I've spent years suffocating because I wanted you. And here you are... available for a price."
Hana: [Stunned, gasping] "What are you saying...?"
Panel 3
(Ren pushes her back onto the bed, hovering over her. His gaze is possessive.)
Ren: "If you’re going to be a whore, then you’re mine. No more strangers. From tonight, you belong only to your son."
Page 4: The New Contract
Panel 1
(A silent, heavy moment. Hana looks up at him, the shame in her eyes being replaced by a twisted sense of relief. She reaches up to touch his face.)
Hana: "If that's what you want... if that's the only way you'll stay with me..."
Panel 2
(Ren begins to undo the ties of her kimono. The "Mother" is gone; only the "Possession" remains.)
Ren: "Everything you are... it’s all mine now. I’ll be your only master."
Panel 3
(The light in the room dims. They embrace, a silhouette of a bond that has broken all laws.)
Ren: "Welcome home, Mom."