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Great job on your project! I can see you have put in a lot of effort to make this dynamic 🍕

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  • Really nice that you're preloading the background image! Clever 👀
  • Excellent validation, super nice that you've created a function for this!
  • Nice usage of objects as well! For future reference: name object keys in lowercase
  • Nice usage of the while loop, and nice validation with isNan 👍

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Your code is easy to follow and is well-formatted too.

Keep up the good work, I'm impressed by the complexity of this project. Shows that you're eager to proceed to coming weeks' material 😉

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document.getElementById("startOrder").addEventListener("click", (event) => {
event.preventDefault(); //the default action is stopped i.e promt
startOrder();
});
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Sorry for the late review Zoe!

Your code was really easy to follow and very nice overall. Very inspiring. It was hard to find anything to suggest improvement on 😄 Great work!! I just had one suggestion that could improve the user experience somewhat.

Keep up the good work!

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// Start here
// preloads the background img to avoid delays

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Very smart to preload the background image 👍

// Your code goes here
// Function to get valid user selection
// Two parameters (promptText: for questions), (options: for valid inputs)
const getValidSelection = (promptText, options) => {

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Really like this approach, wish I had thought of it ⭐

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The only thing I thought of while trying your bot was that as a user I couldn't cancel during the order process. Clicking "Cancel" just prompted the "Invalid option" alert over and over. Maybe find a way to check if the user has clicked "Cancel" and then cancel the order instead.

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